Ek Land Ki Kartut – Part IX

Hi dosto ke aur mere khyal se ye bhi ho shle do dino se main kahani ka koi part post nahi kar paya kyoki dosto main kisi personal kaam se bahot busy tha isi liye aisa hua, kher iske sath sath ek baat aur hai jo main apse aaj ka ye part shuru hone se pehle karna chahta hoon aur wo ye hai ki kai logo ko lagta hai ki main ye kahani “Chudai Ka Gyan” se copy kar raha hoon! jese hi mujhe kai logo se aise mails aur comments mile to mujhe badi nirasha hui, kyoki dosto mera aisa kuch bhi karne ka koi irada nahi hai aur balki miss pinky yani ki “Chudai Ka Gyan” kahani ki author ne khud mujhe mail karke ye baat kahi ki main ye baat aap sabhi se clear kar loon ki ye kaha yani “Ek Land Ki Kartut” unki kahani nahi balki meri kahani hai aur yaha yaki ki jada tar readers miss pinky ko is kahani ke feedback mail kar rahe hai, to dosto meri aap sabhi story readers se vinati hai ki please is kahani ke liye sabhi feedback ya comment chahe wo positive hai ya negtive mujhe mail kare.

Kyoki ye kahani “Chudai Ka Gyan” se bilkul alag hai aur abhi to ye kahani sirf start hui hai main kisi bhi tarah ki copy nahi kar raha hoon aur haan dosto main ya koi bhi story author jo yaha kahani likhta hai wo sirf aur sirf aap sabhi readers ke liye ghanto tak beth kar kahani likhta hai to please agar aapko kahani achi nahi lagti ya bahot pasnad aati hai ya aap usme kisi tarah ke badlav chahte hai, to please aap kam se kam ek mail karke ya comment karke story author ko kam se kam ek baat bateye to sahi, taki wo apki galatiyon ko sudhar sake aur apki ichhao ko dhyan me rakh kar kahani ko aage badha sake, dosto main aaj aapse bahot lambi baat ki hai kyoki shayad ye baaate apse karna jaruri tha aur haan agar aap chahte hai ki main ye story na likhu aur ya main ki aur story start karu to please aap mujhe mail ya comment karke batiye aur dosto dhyan rakhiye meri mail id hai “[email protected]”, to aaiye ab aaj ka part shuru karte hai.

Chudai ke baad mis nisha aur arun ab puri tarah se nidhal ho chuke the aur hafte hue wo do bed par let gaye, miss nisha ke muh par laga arun ka variye ek chip-chipahat si peda kar raha tha par miss nisha ko usme bahut maza aa raha tha wo muskurate hue apni ek ungali par variya ko laga kar lolipop ki tarah chus rahi thi, arun bhi hafta hua miss nisha ki aur dekh kar muskuraye ja raha tha, aurn “saali teri chut to kaaf mast hai aaj to maja hi aa gaya” miss nisha “tumhara land bhi kam nahi hai jaanu to me bhi aaj meri chut ki puri khudai ki hai” arun “fikar mat kar ab to teri chut ka roj hi baaja bajayega mera land” miss nisha “hmmmm jaanu mujhe to tumhara land bahot pasand aa gaya hai tum chaye meri chut har pal marte raho mujhe isse koi etraj nahi hoga” arun “saali kuti behen chod main to tere ko bahot sharif samajhta tha par tu to ek number ki chudakkad nikali” miss nisha ye sunte hi hasne lagi.

Aur boli “mere raaja tum kya jaano main hoon kya chij abhi to tum bache ho” arun ye sunte hi thde gusse me bola “saali maa ki lodi teri kaya teri maa ki bhi chut faad kar rakh sakta hoon ye man bachcha nahi tera yaar hoon aur tu saali randi meri rakhel” miss nisha “achha to tum meri maa ko chodoge hmmm?” arun “haan agar teri maa bhi tere jesi randi hai to uski bhi chut ka halwa bana deta hoon bula lena usko bhi kabhi” miss nisha “oohh jaanu nahi main tumhe kisi ke sath nahi bantungi kyoki meri chut ki kaafi hai tumhare land ko khane ke liye” wo do ise tarah baate karte rahe par chudai ka naya dor bilkul jaari nahi hua kyoki arun ka land pehli chudai ki vajha se thoda chhil gaya tha is liye wo shaam tak miss nisha ki aang ang ki chumta chusta raha, aur aakhir kaar shaam ki wo sama aa hi gaya ki jab arun miss nisha ke ghar se uski ek lambi kiss leka nikal aaya.

Aaj road par chalte hue arun bada hi masti me jhum raha tha uske sharir me ek alag si hi masti thi, chudai ke wo pal baar baar uske chehre par ek mastani si muskan bikher rahe the aur wo khush hota bhi kyo na use ek free ki randi jo mil gayi thi jo uske isharo par nachane ko teyar thi ab aakhi ek javana mard ko aakhi kya chahiye, iske baad wo sidha college gaya aur priya ko pick karke apne ghar ki aur chal diya aur dono behen bhai baate karte karte kab ghar pahunch gaye pata hi nahi chala aur fir kab shyaam hui kab missni nisha ke bare me sochte sochte arun ki aankh lag gayi arun ko bas pata hi nahi chali aur wo ek ghehari need me ghode bech kar so gaya, dosto aaj ka part yehi khayam hota hai aur main janta hoon ki aap soch rahe honge ki ye kya baat hue ki aaj to khuchh khas padhne ko mila hi nahi aur bas main hi aapse baat karta raha.

Par dosto wo baate karna bhi apse jaruri tha aur umid hai ki ye baat to aap bhi achhi tarah se samajh jaoge aur is kahani ke baare me apne feedback aur comments ki aap ye kahani aage padhna chahte hai ya main apke liye kuch alag se likhun, please mujhe jarur batana aur haan dosto meri mail id hai “[email protected]” please is kahani ye liye yahi mail kare, dhanyawad. Kahani padhne ke baad apne vichar niche comments me jarur likhe, taaki hum apke liye roz aur behtar kamuk kahaniyan pesh kar sake – DK